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08-06-2007, 08:29 pm
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What They Wanna See (poem)
What They Wanna See
They see me smiling But I’m not happy All my pain hidden away No one see’s what really on the inside The real me No one would want to All they care is that I look and act happy I have become great at acting No one can tell I’m dying inside And they never will I will suffer alone For the rest of my life        
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#2
08-07-2007, 05:22 pm
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wow hun thats a great poem. i can totally relate to the feelings portrayed. hun keep up the good work and keep sharing its great. love ya and god bless ya
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