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Kaitie's story
this is a story i worte about a girl that goes through self-harm and how she over can it.. There are six parts to this story and you might have to wait for the next part(s)
so here is the story i worte. Kaite's story Katie was like any other girl. Enjoying summer days, hangging out with her friends, staying up late, and other things girls love to do. Summer was winding down and school started the next day. Kati and her friends always preyed that they were atleast in one class with each other. And as always they were. Katie knew that this was going t be a great year. Or so she thought. Katie's friends started to know a change in her apperane. Katie was staying up late, she hasn't been eatting right, she has been hanging around with different people, and her additude has change. It wasn't before long her friends found out that Kate has been self-hamering. Her friend's tried to talk to and wanted to know why she started to self-harm. She didn't say why she started to self-ham. Kaite was online late one night and one of her friends poped up and wanted to talk. Kaite had nothing better to do, so she started talking to her friend. Kaite,? Her friend Casey said. Can I ask you a question? Sure, Kaite said. Why did you start to self-harm you'reself? There was a long pause whiched seemed like forever. Katie? Casey said. Kaite responsed. I started because..... TO BE CONTINUED.......
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part 2 coming soon
HEY THAT RYMED ^__^
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Just waiting for part two..... |
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give me about 2-3minutes to get it
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I started becasue... There was a long pause. "Katie," Casey said. I started because i am over stressed from school, and no one won't leave me the **** alone and stop teasing me. Katie said. WHY ARE YOU DOING THAT TO YOURESELF??? Casey said. Don't worry about Katie said. Its nothing to worry about. But Katie, Casey said. Before Casey could finsih wht she was typing, Katie signed off.
Casey just stared at the computer. She can't believe what her best friend has been doing to herself to reless stress. She was up all night worring about her best friend. asey didn't know what to do. She thought to herself, who should she tell, a teacher, her mom, Katies mom, WHO... Casey didn't bother with it. She just hoped for the best and see what happens. The next day Casey saw Katie and went to talked to her. As Casey got to Katie she notice something. Katie was crying. Casey has never seen Katie cried in her whole life. They have been best friends since they were seven years old. But why was Katie crying. Katie, why are you crying. Casey asked. Your the first person. The first person to what. Casey asked. Your the first person to know that. She paused. The first person to know that I self-harm. Casey couldn't believe it. She was the first person to know that Katie self-harms. Katie, how long have you been doing this. Casey asked. Katie looked at Casey then looked down. Katie? Katie paused for what seemed like forever. four years. FOUR YEARS!!!! Casey shouted at Katie. Why don't you tell someone about this? Because they will lock me up in the nut house and put a striaght jacket on me. Katie, no they- Just don't worry OK. I'm fine nothing bad can happen. Casey was online checking her myspace. Just checking her messages, picture comments, and other things. She heard her cell phone ring which as odd becasue no one has ever called her at 10:30 at night. Hello? Casey said. Casey I can't stand it anymore. I'm going ****ing nuts. No one will leave me the ****a lone and stop ****ing teasing me. I have a god **** kninve to my wriste just waiting to cut. Casey knew it was Katie. KATIE STOP AND TAKE A FEW DEEP BREATHS. Katie are you thear. Katie, Katie KATIE!!! Casey was shaking like crazy. At this point she is freaking out. She is crying as she is saying, "what do I do, what do I do?" The next day at school, Casey gets the shock of her life. To Be Continued note: i'm trying to edit it becaue of the language sorry it there is any foll lanuage that i missed
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i wanna know what happens!!!
xxx
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part 3
Casey still couldn't get over what happened last night. She couldn't fall asleep until 12:00 at night. Casey and Kaite were both in the same gym class which they had first period today. Casey was running late for gym, but the gym teacher was layed back and really didn't care who was late. She saw that everyone was in the gym playing dodgeball. Casey wasn't really into that kind of game. So she went into the locker room to get her old gym clothes. As she walked in there stood Katie. Casey just stood there in the door way. As soon as Katie turned around, she saw Casey and Kaite took off running to the other exit in the locker room. Casey couldn't believe it. Casey saw the scars on Katies arms. They were so bad that Casey felt like crying. Casey just sat in the locker room until gm was over with. For the rest of the day, Casey couldn't get the image out of head. She couldn't get the image of Kaites scars on her arms. When ever she was in class and she felt like crying, she asked the teacher if she could use the restroom. Once she got to the restroom, she just cried. As casey was walking back to her class she saw Katie walking her way. Casey stoped to see if Katie will stop. Katie? Casey said. Katie just looked at the gorund as she walked back past Casey. Casey was feeling like total crap at this point. When she got back to her class room she asked the teacher if she could go see the nurse because she didn't feel well. The nurse let Casey go home and Casey just went to bed. Casey woke up the next day still feeling a little bumbed about Katie ignoring her. But Casey thought today will be a new day for her and Katie. Casey went to her locker go all her books and went to her first class. Casey walked into her class and got ready for class. As the bell rang Casey was a little puzzled because Casey and Katie are in the same classes in the morning. Katie didn't come in the class at all. This kept up for about a week. Casey soon remember that Katies parents were out of town and katie was by herself for the whole week. Casey thought of the worse that may have happened to Katie. Casey decided to see if Katie was at her house or not. Casey and Katie were such good friends that Katie gave Casey a key to her house just in case. After knocking a few times Casey decided to unlock the door. Casey walked to Katies house saying her name. Katie?, Katie?, No one answered As Casey made her way up stairs she heard a song playing. She remembered it from MTV. It was "Keep Holding On" by Avril Lavigne. As Casey opened the door, she feared for the wrose. As the door opened Casey looked in Katies room. Katie?, Are you in here. To Be Continuded..
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self-injury starts with one small cut, but recovery starts with one small step at a time
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It really is good RC, I was holding my breath! LOL... oh I hope it continues soon...
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Casey walked in katie's room hearing the lyrics to "keep holding on". As Casey walks in she sees Kaite sitting on the ground.. She is at Katie's side as she hears the song playing
"You're not alone Together we stand I'll be by your side You know I'll take your hand When it gets cold And it feels like the end There's no place to go You know I won't give in no I won't give in Keep holdin' on Cause you know we'll make it through We'll make it through Just, stay strong Cause you know I'm here for you I'm here for you There's nothing you can say (nothin you can say) Nothing you can do(nothin you can do) there's no other way when it comes to the truth So, keep holding on Cause you know we'll make it through We'll make it through" As Casey hears the lyrics she gently grabed Katie's hand. Katie looked up at Casey with tears coming down her face. Katie stood up and gave a Casey a hug which seemed like forever. As the song plays Caesy heard the words to the song "Your not alone together we stand I'll be by your side, you know I'll take your hand" After song finished, Katie look at Casey and very softly said, "I'm sorry Casey," Casey comforting Katie saying, "It's ok Katie, It's ok. We'll get you the help you need' I don't want to, Katie said while she is crying. Katie, It's for the best and you need it. Katie said quietly to Casey, "ok". Casey and Katie talked untill Katies mom came home. Katie? Casey said. Yeah? You do know you have to tell youre mom about this. Casey said. Yeah, I know. Katie said in a sad way. Remember, I'll be by youre side, Casey said. About 2 hours later Katies mom came home. Katie, I'm home. You ready to tell her Katie? There was a pause. Katie said yeah, I am ready. Casey and Katie both made there way down stairs. Mom, can I talk to you about something? Katie said. Sure, what is it....... To Be Continued.... sorry about the suspense
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self-injury starts with one small cut, but recovery starts with one small step at a time
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Ok, great story....so far!!!! I want to read the rest! I hate suspense!!! AHHH! lol. Yeah, I'm kind of crying!!!! Great Work!
Rx.
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part 5
Mom, I'm sorry i have been keep this from you. Katie said. Keeping what from me honey. Katie turn backed to Casey and whispered, "I can't do it" Yes you can remember I'll be by yourside, and you know I'll take your hand. Mom, I'm sorry that I've kept this from you. I have been cutting myself to reless stress and pain. Katies Mom looked at Katie. How long have you been doing this? Katie looked at the ground and said, "four years." Why didn't you come and talked to me about youre problems Katie. I didn't think no one will understand. Kaite said while she had tears coming down her face. Don't worry Katie we will get you te help you need. Katies Mom said. Katie? Yeah? Can I see the scars? Katie grabed her sleve and paused and then pulled it up. Katies Mom stood there and shock. Katies Mom ran her hand up and down Kaites scars. Some were deep and some were wide. Kaite and her Mom huged each other for what seemed like forever. Katies mom made a few phone calls and it was all planed out. Katie and Casey were upstairs talking to each other. Casey wanted to know a little more abot Katies past life. So what ever happened to your dad? Casey asked. He was an abusive drunk who wouldn't control his drinking. Thats another reason why I started to cut. Katie? Katies Mom called her from downstairs. Casey and Katie walked downstairs. Yeah Mom? Katie said. It's all planed out. Yu are going to go to a hospital and you are going to stay there for a few weeks and you will attend a group meeting there. Katie was ok with the idea and her and Casey went up to get her suitcase packed. The next day, Casey, Katie, and Katie's Mom drove to the hospital. Casey and Katie were in the back seat talking. Casey? Yeah Katie? I'm a little scard. Casey reached into Katie's bag and gave to Katie. I was goign to wait to suprize you but i wanted to give it to you now. it was a picture of them when they went on a trip together. Katie just looked at it and ran her fringers over the picture and looked at Casey and said as she was crying, thanks for being such a a great friend. They gave each other a hug. Katies Mom looked in the mirror and she smiled and continued to drive, They reached the hospital an hour later. Where here Kaites Mom said. Everyone got out. Katie stood there and looka at the hospital. Kaite? Casey said. Are ok? Yeah Katie said. They made there way through the hospital doors and to the front desk. Casey and Katie both went to have a seat. Katies mom was at the front desk and said, yes, my daughter Kaite is here. Ok , the deskclerek said. The doctor will be you any minute. Casey was sitting next to Katie and Kaite looked a little scard and sad about this. Casey said the lyrics to her favorite song to Katie "You're not alone Together we stand I'll be by your side You know I'll take your hand When it gets cold And it feels like the end There's no place to go You know I won't give in no I won't give in Keep holdin' on Cause you know we'll make it through We'll make it through Just, stay strong Cause you know I'm here for you I'm here for you There's nothing you can say (nothin you can say) Nothing you can do(nothin you can do) there's no other way when it comes to the truth So, keep holding on Cause you know we'll make it through We'll make it through" Katie looked up at Casey with a smile and a tear going down her face. Katie's Mom wanted to talked to Casey for a minute. Kaite's Mom wanted to thank Casey for being such a great friend and helping her daughter through this. Kaites mom gave Casey a hug. Casy walked back to Katie and sat down. Hello I'm Dr. Steve and you must be Katie. katie said yea and shaked his hand. The doctor talked to Kaite's Mom and Casey. the doctor told Casey it ws a great thing that you broght your friend here. Once all was send and done Katie's mom and Casey gave Katie a hug good bye and they were off. Katie sttod in the door way watching Casey and her Mom drive off. The doctor put his hand on her sholder and said, it's ok we will give you the help you need. They walked off into a room and they srated to talked. So Katie, tell me about you're life..... To Be Continued
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self-injury starts with one small cut, but recovery starts with one small step at a time
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part 6 the final chapter
Katie told Dr. Steve her whole life story. Dr. Steven had a pencil and a pad of paper. He was taking down notes. So why did you start to self-harm Katie? The Dr. asked. My dad was a absuive drunk who beat me up when i didn't listen to him, i was over stressed from school, nd the kids at school wouldn't leave me alone and stop teasing me. What happened to you're dad? The Dr. asked. My Mom deforced him when she found out he abused me. The doctor finished writing down the fianl notes and he aksed Kaite if he could the scars. Katie said yeah and showed him the scars. The doctor looked at Katie's scars in shock. Katie started to cry and the doctor didn't know why. Katie? Whats the matter? He asked. Why are you being so nice to me? I abused my body in a way that someone should be cussing me out. Katie said. You were just relessing youe pain and anger in a way you didn't know that could hurt you. You didn't know what cutting could do to you right? Right, Kaite said. There was a knock at the door. A women that must of been in her 30's opened th door and asked Dr. Steve if everything was done. The docotor said yeah and Katie went with the women. She took Katie to her room which she would be there for the next three weeks. Katie started to unpack until she saw another girl in the room. Hi, th other girl said. Katie said hi back. My name is Alice, My name is Katie. They talked for about twenty minutes while Kaite was unpacking. So why are you here. Katie pulled up her sleve and showed Alice her scars. Alice pulled up her sleve's and showed Katie her scars. Once they were down talking it was time for the group meeting Boys and girls were there talking. Alice pointed out to some of the kids that were there. She point to a boy who was 17. Thats Jake he's been depressed for three years and he's parents ant him to get help. That's Beckey she's 16. She has an eatting disorder. She didn't had time to go through everyone, so she pointed out to some of the kids. Thats Jerman, Kyle, Alex, Jordan, Lee, Dixi, and thats Nikki. Once everyone was seated the therapist said it ws to talk about our lives and whats been bothering us. She looked at Katie. Katie, since youre new will you like to tell your story. Katie was finally comfrotable about telling her story. Once she was telling her story the therapist said, you must have a real nice friend. Katie smiled and said, yeah I do. The weeks went by fast. and Katie no longer had thoughts of cutting herself. She left the hospital a new person. She was more active in school, she made up for lost time from her friends, and when ever she had troubles she went and talked to her Mom. Katie kept in touch with Alice and Katie found out that everyone at the hospital made a full recovery. Years went by and Katie and Casey still stayed in touched. Katie garduated from college with a therapist degree. Casey also garduate from college witha docotrs degree. Kaitie decide tht being a therapist wasn't her thing. She quiet being a therapist. Instead she went to schools, hospitals, and other places becoming a motavation speaker. Telling everyone her story. Katie never got tired of what she did. When ever she went to a new school or hospital to talk to people, she was never afraid. To tell her story
THE END..
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That was touching, excellent work.
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i have more if want to read them... about 3 or 4 more stories
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i hate double posts
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That was really good! Thanks!
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Thank You! |
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you guys are missing brittnays story.....
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