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Everything's Okay (poem)

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Old 07-30-2007, 07:31 pm
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Everything's Okay (poem)

Everything’s Okay
I’m going to smile like nothing’s wrong
I’ll talk like everything’s great
I’ll act like its all a dream and pretend I’m not hurting
Pain and suffering till the very end
There are no tears, no feelings of guilt

Nowhere to channel the anger
Nowhere to leave the pain
Living is a nightmare
So kill me
Kill me now
I don’t wanna live

Things are never what they seem
So don’t judge a person by the mask they wear
Dig deeper and you will find…
That the truth lies within.
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Everything’s Okay
I’m going to smile like nothing’s wrong
I’ll talk like everything’s great
I’ll act like its all a dream and pretend I’m not hurting
Pain and suffering till the very end
There are no tears, no feelings of guilt

Nowhere to channel the anger
Nowhere to leave the pain
Living is a nightmare
So kill me
Kill me now
I don’t wanna live

Things are never what they seem
So don’t judge a person by the mask they wear
Dig deeper and you will find…
That the truth lies within.

That's really good sweetie..

Keep writing......

What you are writing has so much truth to it for so many of us.
I can relate to almost every line you wrote in there.

A lot of other people will be able to also. So many times when
we feel like that we forget or don't realize that someone else
in the world feels the exact same way.

So by helping yourself you are also helping other people out there.

I like it!!!

Keep on Writing!!
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Well I`ve seen the sunrise
See the love in my Man's Eyes
Feel the touch of a precious child
And I know a Mother`s Love

And its funny how it`s the simple things in life that mean the most

Raise you glasses for a toast
To a little bit of chicken fried

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